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This the feedback from my teacher on a paper that I ordered from you.
After meeting with my teacher, she told me that the paper is a bit too broad and off topic.
What you need to do is edit the essay part by simply just comparing the original article to the rewritten blog post by focusing on elements such as sentence structure, word choice, use of citations, and text format. also, you need to provide examples from both the article and the blogpost.
Also, edit the thesis statement to match the goal of the essay which is “register shift”
Finally, follow my teacher’s feedback comments.


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